My Daily Food Experience
When I’m wake up and I always feel hungry, I eat food that I like. First,
usually every morning I always eat with rice at my boarding house that is “Warteg Bu Goceng”. This place is very clean and cheap even we can take a very rice at
the same price. For my favorite side dish is when I eat rice with fried chicken, omelet,
and capcay. The second, after finished the class, me with my friends goes to
citywalk for eat at golden resto. The food that I always eat and I like are geprek
crispy chicken, soup, and fried rice with chicken blackpepper. The food in
golden resto is very tasty and cheap. This place is the most visited place by
me and friends. The last is warmindo. Warmindo is the place for eat noodles in the
boarding area. This place has always been my favorite place with my friends to
discuss and gather. I always buy noodles with eggs and don’t forget sausages
and nugget. That’s the food that I often eat every day.
your story is very good, and i love eating too!
BalasHapusi didnt find any grammatical errors, so good job!
Hello friends, thank you to write this theme essay. Its so interesting to read it, but i just want suggest you to make it long and completely your essay because after i read your essay. Your essay is shortly and the area of your write is not widely. I hope that you can added again the supporting ideas that i mean. Thank you
BalasHapusYour story is really enjoyable to read. the pictures make me hungry at the time i read your story. You are really good at delivering it into sentences. But, it would be nice if you check the typing before you post it because i found some words error in it. Keep it up the good work, Shelly!
BalasHapusshelly, you make me hungry. By the way, i want to suggest you to elaborate your conclusion, because i think it is really short and ambiguous. For conclusion, it is better if you write again about the main topic that you want to tell us. And I suggest you to check your writing first before publish it, because I found some grammatical errors on it. Fighting, shelly!!
BalasHapusi love eating and from the picture, i think its very delicious food
BalasHapusafter i read your essay, your essay is good, good job shelly!!
Your story is fun, ahaha
BalasHapusYou make me hungry
I love food too... those picture make me feel hungry :))
BalasHapusReading your story makes me want to eat again:(
BalasHapusYou have good paragraph! and more better if you make little bit longer in your conclusion.
look like you really like to eat hahaha great story, maybe give a little bit for the conclusion i think its to short
BalasHapusJust a little word error and everything else is great! Wow
BalasHapusWow your essay are amazing. Makes me feel hungry 😍
BalasHapusWoww its soo good, you can treat me some food anytime 😂
BalasHapusI really like your article since the theme is food! I love food, too! But, from you story, it could be better if you mention the most fav food in there, shelly ;) good job!
BalasHapusWow, it's really delicious selly . maybe it would be nice if the price could be detailed hehe dont often eat noodles yaa , not good for your health hehe
BalasHapusREVISION :
BalasHapusWhen I’m wake up and I always feel hungry, I eat food that I like. First, usually every morning I always eat with rice at my boarding house that is “Warteg Bu Goceng”. This place is very clean and cheap even we can take a very rice at the same price, for the price just 2 thousand rupiahs as much as you want. For my favorite side dish is when I eat rice with fried chicken, omelet, and capcay. The second, after finished the class, me with my friends goes to citywalk for eat at golden resto. The food that I always eat and I like are geprek crispy chicken, soup, and fried rice with chicken blackpepper. The food in golden resto is very tasty and cheap. This place is the most visited place by me and friends. The last is warmindo. Warmindo is the place for eat noodles in the boarding area. This place has always been my favorite place with my friends to discuss and gather. I always buy noodles with eggs and don’t forget sausages and nugget. That’s the food that I often eat every day. you must to try all my favorite food. lets try guys!